I agree, could be more away from the radiator. That's the beauty of using a shroud, fan does not need to be close to the radiator to do its job of pulling air through the radiator. I think what that diagram is telling you is: use spacers as necessary to have the fan half in / half out of the rear edge of the shroud. I believe that is the optimum fan location for evacuating air out of a shroud.
On the other hand, you don't want more than 1 inch around the perimeter of the fan, between the fan blade tips and the shroud. You have to buy fan and shroud sized to work together.